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[Generic Protagonist #1]

umm.... no.

I kinda chuckled once. It wasn't funny, but you did put effort into it. I think. Well it was longer than the average flash at least. I agree with IronHayden, its just to... let's say "out of control". Your story can have structure and still have humor at the same time. I'll just say i think it was more fun for you to make it than it was for me to watch. Better luck next time, though. You have potential.

drodZILiA responds:

As I've said in other responses, we will focus more on a solid plot structure in later episodes.

[Morphemon Duelists Ep.1]

wait..

is the cupcake ever going to die or is it just an annoying perpetual duel

PiGPEN responds:

The cupcake is god.